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The trap of meter and rhyme (Soneto. Or when we measure everything by their own decency q's feelings, or the thread of his own voice)

And it's not a criticism of Jorge Guillen! When you should read a little more to get it. It is simply an example of doing things and not the dictates of the thread of voice (to read the original sonnet in "Canticle"): It's raining

rained yet the chestnut,
and gout grass
smooth up a balloon that keeps the hidden
freedom of forgetfulness
(Glorious verse this: the hidden freedom of forgetfulness.
great freedom that is rid of everything superfluous
learned
and everything that happened Yere)
impatient Birds nests
venture into the water frond servant still heavenly.
still bitter afternoon on the balcony as promised. Both
gray late
pause where the world coincides with the tedium
resigned to expect everything to happen.
No! Of vacuum itself while causing my discomfort,
siege emerges the true charm immortal
The new sentence. Thirteen

verses, even that number cat cat!, Better than the fourteen original
enforced better than changing the words of lines rhyme.
She alone, WORD, find your seat.
not need anyone to vote or measure, or try a music forced him, no, not in the rhyme.
Follow your child whisper:
She is the best metric when it has to rhyme, rhyme,
if you play it.

many times the music is more rhythm than melody as Bach might show.


The new phrase (which says Guillén) and born

of the hidden freedom of forgetfulness.
Although I'm tired of this hiding
impose my being free,
this silencing, it strings. Talking
what the brown ooze drop
and grass, so the stone

sealed without being
that its purpose but that of the gravediggers.

And sing me a song of tenderness unprecedented